A light hearted poem indeed and it's good to walk in the world. I like the style you used early in the poem. I generally hate rhyme at the end of every line but I though it work well and gave the piece a playful quality. your use of hut was clever and for a minute I had to think about it but I just got off work so I'm tired. I think the piece loses that playfulness as the rhyme becomes more sparse. I like what you said in the ending but I think the way you said it could use so reworking. I realize not all poetry has to rhyme I seldom use perfect rhyme but I like your use of it here and I think the piece would have a more unified feel if the rhyme was more consistent. Anyway have a blessed day. G'night.
This is really good and I do believe this write turned out a lot deeper then what your first intention was
To me you are showing the reader how important nature nature is to a beautiful and succesful life
I believe it is truly sad how many humans take natures beauty for granted
I really enjoyed this
I believe this will open up some eyes to the true beauty of nature
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think