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    dots Submission Name: What's Crazydots
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    Author: TwistedMinded
    ASL Info:    23/m/San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 82/109/32
    Words: 416
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    What the fuck is crazy,
    Am I crazy because i dont think like you
    or because i think death is a beautiful thing
    Am i crazy because i fuck 3 bitches at a time with no condom
    Am i crazy because i dont salute to Uncle Sam or
    Because i salute my pancho for no reason got dam
    What is crazy?
    Being poor and stealing for survival
    Stocking my prey and loving my rival
    Hitting a cop cause i hate the law
    Or hitting my bitch till her brain shatters all over my fuckin wall
    Crazy right shit i aint crazy
    You crazy
    You crazy because you ditch school on a Monday afternoon
    You crazy because you walk in the streets smoking a joint
    Wow you crazy
    Talking back to your parents
    Getting an F on your report card on purpose
    No shit thatís crazy real crazy
    Im one of those fools that hates God but follows his word
    Im one of those that hate Hitler but respect his state of mind
    Im one of those who smuggles people and drugs across the
    State lines just for my people to eat in the hood
    But see i aint crazy
    Im just being myself
    I love myself
    Crazy is what makes me who i am
    If I werenít crazy I wouldnít be a live
    I would be another bitch following president bush to war and dying for no fucking reason
    I love being crazy is the purpose of life
    I love seeing guts splatter all over me
    I love seeing my sister getting fuck by some stranger in the street
    Who the fuck is crazy haha
    Man
    I dont even know no more
    Ill tell you what i think is crazy
    The government letting kids rot and suffer dying from hunger
    But at the same time
    Sponsoring all this kids from Africa because their dickís hanging longer
    Tweekers, cokeheads, stupid fools with guns, me having sex with a nun
    Talking to yourself because you got no friends and seeing Jesus in the wall
    But no im not crazy
    Youíre crazy for liking this poem
    Youíre crazy because you relate to this poem but at the end of the day
    Donít judge a real crazy fool because were all crazy.
    I THINK YOUíRE THE REAL CRAZY ONE




    Submitted on 2007-05-02 15:59:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      damn babe... Take a chill pill with the crazy [censored] or you're gonna scare me away... (lol) Yeah right I couldn't stop lovin you even if I tried :)
    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
       Um yeah, I'll admit i'm crazy, but who the hell isnít?
    lololol..... This world caters for the crazy, this world profits from the crazy,,, It just doesnít pay to be normal what ever that is. Normal will kill you in this insane society.

    Cheers miss fit.
    from a fellow miss fit
    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      I couldn't agree with this more. I relate so much man!
    WOW!
    I love this soooo much...
    This is one of the few poems that I have read that is REAL, and straight forward.
    I LOVE this line(s)...
    "The government letting kids rot and suffer dying from hunger
    But at the same time
    Sponsoring all this kids from Africa because their dickís hanging longer"
    You got a spot on my "faves"...

    <3,
    Lizzz
    | Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by Liz_Renee | [ Reply to This ]
      dude cool write. just sayying what u are and that u are proud of what u are and that u are not afraid to be yourself ups and downs and all.

    we wouldnt truly know what crazy is cuz it depends on whatever sociaty says crazy is at that time. sux.


    peace
    Ayah
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] man that was full on, most would sit here and tell you to stop writing after reading that but I reckon you got a nice point across...even though it did come over fairly controversially.
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by ShadowedAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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