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Looking Perfect for You

Author: bubble_popper15
ASL Info:    17, f, confused
Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 201 /127 /45
Words: 159
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 1155
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 911


This is for the loser who doesn't realize that I like him, but he should...

Looking Perfect for You

I get up 20 extra minutes to straighten my hair, put on some make-up, and dress up
Just to look perfect for you
I go to school the next day, strutting down the halls, waiting for you to catch up
But, I realize soon that none of this matters to you
I could come to school with purple hair
Or boots up to the knee
No matter what I do to impress you, you still wouldn't care
You wouldn't pay any attention to me
I try so hard to look good
I try to show you my real side
You don't pay attention to me like you should
So, instead of strutting my stuff, behind my locker door I hide
Hoping that you won't notice me
Hoping that you won't see the tears that steadily pour
There's a good thing that comes out of this that I can see
I don't have to get up 20 minutes early anymore!

Submitted on 2007-05-02 16:58:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah!!!sleep more...
sleep is important

more important then someone who dont care if you are there or not
you are good enough to not need that 20 mins to get ready to impress someone else

"But, I realize soon that none of this matters to you
I could come to school with purple hair"
somehow i think it can do with a spacing between these 2 lines but its no biggie(another not real word i guessing)
it can work just the way it is
| Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
  Ahhh, young love. I remember those days. I'm actually only 21, so i'm not really that much older. Anyways, It's good that you don't have to get up 20 minutes early anymore. Have you tried just telling him that you like him? Guys are slow sometimes.
| Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Samuel Bielz | [ Reply to This ]

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