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    dots Submission Name: Weaknessdots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 47/88/61
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 110
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    Description:
       It's about a character walking through the streets trying to deal with thoughts over a suicide letter written for them by a friend they likely had sexual encounters with but never was very intimately attracted to.


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    dotsWeaknessdots
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    this is my amulet
    i am never coming back for it!
    it has lost it's luster
    just as too; has my desire.

    similar to how the gritty side of town makes me shiver
    so does this gritty love-stained letter
    i so do not like to be put on pedestals
    Do not! Scape blame! On me! For you! Being suicidal!

    these words mark the end of our future
    i claimed to be there, but i was a liar
    if i always told the truth; would i ever be happy?!
    so you're saying, i should've believed more than half the things you've told me?

    not unlike these storm drains, in the streets i walk by,
    thoughts are escaping from things that make my mind ask, "why"
    visualizing these memories of you extracted as drips
    each and every drop falling into passing slits

    the thoughts of you feeling you had nothing less
    void all my thoughts about you
    and makes me think even less and less
    about you: and your unattractive weakness.




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