This is the best thing I've read on here in ages.The vocab and rhyming are excellent and it rolls off the tongue with intent.Although the content is rather abstract that doesn't affect the quality of the piece.I like the metre you use also-perfectly suits the mood of the poem.
This is really good
To me I dont believe you spoke of death I believe you spoke of life and how it is our choice of how we live it
We have 2 choices to either live in the positive or the negative
Sadly some people are just afraid or just to stubborn to live in the positive
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think