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    dots Submission Name: Hypocrite dots
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    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 1002
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 503



    Description:
       What do I care for what any one has to say!

    (Please comment no matter what... I am just a hypocrite like any other.. :D)


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    dotsHypocrite dots
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    Being bored is a eternal curse,
    For the flushed out minds,
    Toilet Sinks looks interesting,

    What is more fascinating?
    Nothing to do!
    Living to die!
    Dying to live!

    Crap, you dress up,
    Decorate, build, fall, stand up
    Screw up,
    In the end,

    Hey, does not everyone die!

    Creepy life, creepier than death!

    Love it if you can,
    Enjoy while you can!

    Shit head!




    Submitted on 2007-05-03 05:57:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm...to me this poem seems 2 be a message for all those [censored]s out there in the world that blow by life so casually and think the world revolves around them...but that's my feeling on it anyway ^.^
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Twin_Snakes | [ Reply to This ]


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