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Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 81 /70 /50
Words: 63
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Your smile was the aphrodisiac
which to my mind
glued your thoughts;
unveiling scars of naked passions.
Yet, wildly ran my emotions
with a rabid dogs' speed.

Still,silhouetes of obscured
imaginations bedeviled
my solitudes' every second.
And all seem lost
in split seconds
cos' you were but a charade...

Alas! 'gainst my heart
blew winds of healing
and behold---sanity prevailed.

Submitted on 2007-05-03 08:07:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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