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ONCE WAS I DRUNK OF OSHAN


Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 81 /70 /50
Words: 65
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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ONCE WAS I DRUNK OF OSHAN


Drown in this silence
which was cloned
with genes of mutual insanity,
Once of Oshan was I drunk.

Though under seige
of liquorless thoughts,
flameless passions ignite
mind with reminiscences
about skin which defies
a mermaids' aura.

Once was I drunk of Oshan,
yet her feminine silhouettes
bonds my fantasies
with realities....
Still, too slowly
did I sip your smiles
to stupor.




Submitted on 2007-05-03 08:15:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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