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Do You

Author: Lavender
ASL Info:    20/F/USA
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Words: 71
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I hope you do...

Do You

Do you know the way I feel about you?
Do you understand my thoughts?
Can you hear my heart beating,
And my stomach tying in knots?
When you come near me,
My stomach gets the butterflies.
Because I know something you probably don't
But if you ask me, I won't lie
But I want to ask you,
Want to ask you so badly,
So badly it hurts,
Do you love me?

Submitted on 2007-05-03 10:16:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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