Nature's Little Wonders by Epiphany

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Author:	Epiphany
ASL Info:	42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:	4.38 - 3342/2139/390
Words:	72

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	693
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Just enjoying a day sitting outside and watching all of natures wonders - big & small.

Happy Day!!!

love,peace,joy&smiles to share

tif

Nature's Little Wonders dots

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How courageous the ant
with me looming
tall above

How efficient, yet tiny
I only regard him
with Love

As the gnat does land
and lightly grace
my written page

For, truly, we are
One ~ No matter
size, race, age

As the silkworm journeys
a thread ~ to claim
the tall oak tree

As our paths do cross
i, you, him, her, she,
"IT", we...

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  You put beautifully into words what I, and I'm sure many also feel. Thank you for a reminder of the wonder of our being and how all is connected.
| Posted on 2011-07-31 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  "Re--- 'Natures Little Wonders'---A very interesting and delightful insight into the tiny world that exists within our own, much larger world, and how everything is relative to everything else. You have a very interesting style which I shall explore further. Good job, take care and keep writing.....Mugsy....
| Posted on 2007-06-25 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]
  You speak of nature as our fellow humans
Truly this must be
But I never think that way
For I despise insects
And I loathe the creeping things
Does this make me a bad man?

I believe in equality
In humans and in animals
But I doubt I shall ever show affection to a bug

Nature's Little Wonders
They escape me somehow
If only I could lose my hate
And become one

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Wonderful outlook on nature, Tiff. A spectacular poem!
| Posted on 2007-05-29 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
  "IT", we.

Very sweet! ^_^ ~Cora
| Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it. thanks for the comment. i'll have more u when i get a chance. i think i'll take a break for a minute. i like the last stanza. cool

tina
| Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  What a lovely write this is. Your love of everything you love shines through in this - quite divine.

Frank.
| Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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