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    dots Submission Name: Nature's Little Wondersdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Just enjoying a day sitting outside and watching all of natures wonders - big & small.

    Happy Day!!!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif


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    dotsNature's Little Wondersdots
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    How courageous the ant
    with me looming
    tall above

    How efficient, yet tiny
    I only regard him
    with Love

    As the gnat does land
    and lightly grace
    my written page

    For, truly, we are
    One ~ No matter
    size, race, age

    As the silkworm journeys
    a thread ~ to claim
    the tall oak tree

    As our paths do cross
    i, you, him, her, she,
    "IT", we...




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      You put beautifully into words what I, and I'm sure many also feel. Thank you for a reminder of the wonder of our being and how all is connected.
    | Posted on 2011-07-31 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      "Re--- 'Natures Little Wonders'---A very interesting and delightful insight into the tiny world that exists within our own, much larger world, and how everything is relative to everything else. You have a very interesting style which I shall explore further. Good job, take care and keep writing.....Mugsy....
    | Posted on 2007-06-25 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]
      You speak of nature as our fellow humans
    Truly this must be
    But I never think that way
    For I despise insects
    And I loathe the creeping things
    Does this make me a bad man?

    I believe in equality
    In humans and in animals
    But I doubt I shall ever show affection to a bug

    Nature's Little Wonders
    They escape me somehow
    If only I could lose my hate
    And become one

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    Wonderful outlook on nature, Tiff. A spectacular poem!
    | Posted on 2007-05-29 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      "IT", we.

    Very sweet! ^_^ ~Cora
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. thanks for the comment. i'll have more u when i get a chance. i think i'll take a break for a minute. i like the last stanza. cool





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    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely write this is. Your love of everything you love shines through in this - quite divine.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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