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    dots Submission Name: Hmmmmmdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHmmmmmdots
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    A question for the teacher, a question I'm almost sure there is not answer to...you can't tell me. I was thinking about how fucking old this place is, teh world, the universe, all the little green men...and the more I think of this the more I worry that we are a bunch of tiny cells living in a test tube, and Jazmine is the eyelash of a giant conscious being. Or maybe I jsut exist in Derricks mind...

    If this were true, lets explore, implore, a whore, just go go now if you can. Okay now, we've restarted our enginese and we are off...

    I'm fighting for my own existence, I know this, I feel it. In everything. In my scorn for time. Like Sisyphus. There is that fucking rock...so I'm fighting, why not be in someone else's mind? It seems as logical, more real to me, than if I were fighting for my existence in a wide universe of questions. It's just too fucking old to guess? Ya dig?




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      you are existential, and if you didnt believe you exixted you couyldnt exist in derricks mind
    | Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      Of course you only exist in my mind.

    And pay no mind to Raivn. She exists only in my mind as well, so whether or not she thinks you exist is irrelevant.
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Derrick Thomas | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think you exist only in Derrick's mind...you at least exist in mine, too.
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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