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    dots Submission Name: Children of tomorrowdots
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    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Dark
    Total Views: 625
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    Bytes: 1172



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    dotsChildren of tomorrowdots
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    Theres so much despair in your eyes
    So much pain and sorrow
    Your hearts about to die
    But you musn't fear
    Because I'll be there
    When you lose your soul
    Like a moth to the flame
    You shall not be seen again.

    -Chorus-
    We are the children of tomorrow
    So today lets pray for the end
    We know so little
    But understand much more

    Theres so much horror in your lips
    All your feelings have gone
    Your heart has turned to stone
    But dont you get scared
    Because I'll be there
    When you lose your soul
    And feel this pain
    Then we will not be seen again

    -Chorus-
    We are the children of tomorrow
    So today lets pray for the end
    We know so little
    But understand much more

    -Chorus-
    We are the children of tomorrow
    So today lets pray for the end
    We know so little
    But understand much more

    When will the time come
    We need to learn much more
    We are the children of tomorrow
    But still we drown in our tears.




    Submitted on 2007-05-03 14:06:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like these lyrics because they're the views of most young people nowadays, but i don't understand the metaphor of the whole song. either way, it's still a good song.
    | Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by knudson18 | [ Reply to This ]
      awww.. i love this so much empathy, so much passion. For tomorrow will come and you'll be there!, to try this person's tears, to help them deal with this pain they feel within..amazing job.. thats a shame 23pple read this (viewed) and not one posted on such an amazing write.. well i am honored to be your first comment :)

    ~!*Jackie*!~
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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