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    dots Submission Name: Mess.Art.Scream.dots
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    Author: Agent V.
    ASL Info:    23/girl/small town
    Elite Ratio:    7.23 - 38/29/24
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 691
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 965



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    dotsMess.Art.Scream.dots
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    Mess.Art.Scream

    His mess is a masterpiece
    her white angel silhouette canvas
    they scream in art
    surreal
    electric
    passion.

    Drunk on us
    but I invesitgate you.
    Imagine
    our metaphor.

    Ate sex like a wild drug
    smeared harmony through
    hard
    rhythm
    hear music's color performing balance
    think with picture
    write from experiment
    we create aesthetic fashion.

    Let him say come free
    know the break time.

    I smoke green after you
    feeling absurdly there
    making every symbol turn black
    never draw which is empty.

    How was my psychedelic
    film sculpture?
    She is he
    and nude only when live.




    Submitted on 2007-05-03 14:23:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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