Description: I'm giving this to my girlfriend Tuesday. I just want advice on how to make it flow better or how to word it a different way. Plus I want to know what you think, It's completely different from what I usually write.
By My Side -------------------------------------------
I had a dream last night
You were in it
I woke up this morning
You were the first thing on my mind
I got on the bus
And for an hour and a half I thought of you
And I was wondering
Were you thinking of me too?
I just want you to know
Everytime you leave my sight you're missed
Your beauty's left its mark
You're there when I close my eyes
I thought of you in class
And my heart began to race
I can't blink
My mind goes blank when I see your face
I sat for hours
Trying to describe the way I feel
It's complicated
Yet so simple at the same time
I wish I'd met you sooner
Everytime I thought to speak I shied
But I know it all worked out
Because I've got you by my side
Awww. This was really sweet. You should give it to her just like it is. It's great and if she likes poetry she should love this poem. I often think the same thing. But about my ex. Which is kinda bad considering he's my boyfriend's bestfriend but my boyfriend understands and doesn't really care that I still have feelings for my ex. Well I hope that she likes it and all goes well. Good luck!
Submission Name: By My Side
