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    dots Submission Name: the meanest girldots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 257
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsthe meanest girldots
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    If I were the kind of girl who was pretty...
    "psychodelicate"
    then Id be the type of girl who would come up to you
    and face you
    and say "Hi pretty boy. I like you."
    but Im not so I trip over words and wish I were thinner, or had nicer eyes, or better hair, and I gag over everything I say..
    and I will lie to make you like me because I need you to like me.
    This night is clumsy, always falling
    and my painting has days smearing into the next so I guess watercolors werent the right choice.
    The music is calling and every word is a soliquoy voiced of an open grave.
    My rubber band is stretched too tight, banded out over days and weeks of empty faces and heartfelt letters.
    You are not my one and only, you are barely my anything.
    I am bored and you seem like you wouldnt cause stress because I cant see myself ever getting attached to you.
    You arent the first, youre short by about a million other stupid boys and you wont be the last.
    Youre a space filler and Im heartless for saying it.
    My days are hot and my nights are airless.
    All the new art is contemporary, and my mind is trapped in a new beginning, anything to be reborn.
    Anything to start this over.

    Lets shake hands.
    Ill introduce myself; youre speaking to a celebrity.
    Im the meanest girl.
    Prepare to be brokenhearted.




    Submitted on 2007-05-03 19:31:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooooooooh i like this one . i can almost relate i'm the flip side tho. because the meanest girl knows that she can do it. you seem a bit unsure. insecurities are hard to over come but once you do it's a trip. the piece was very well written and i love that way that it comes together
    "I am bored and you seem like you wouldnt cause stress because I cant see myself ever getting attached to you.
    You arent the first, youre short by about a million other stupid boys and you wont be the last.
    Youre a space filler and Im heartless for saying it. " this is were i can see it. the trick is being honest. it doesnt make you the meanest girl. she's the one who hurts them for fun. your poem ddoesnt seem to show that malace.


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    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      you're downing on yourself a lot lately. I do like this piece because it has an elegant array of words in wonderful phrases. But i think that being true to yourself isn't heartless. I think you're insucure but hell how isn't. I don't think that makes you less of a person. But don't think that i'm going crazy again....just don't want you to worry. But anyway, that's my opinion on the piece and you. ^_^
    | Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]


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