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    dots Submission Name: the life of a donkey pilgrimdots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsthe life of a donkey pilgrimdots


    the life of any donkey pilgrim
    is a hurricane thru which i enter
    at my own leisure
    slowly the weather arrives
    like a new tune with an old twist
    for me it began at age five
    and ended about 40 minutes later
    after the candles were done
    the cake was gone
    & the balloons drifted away
    some people stayed
    some people left
    it was fun it was clear
    i knew where i stood


    there is no need to look
    for a target -
    where my feet are
    so too the moss that glows
    on the north side of trees
    it's a tall mystery for us all
    point me to my curse


    having crossed the great waters
    where loneliness
    stretches itself too thin
    and disappears
    god's teeth smiled
    like a thousand busted piano keys
    that kept playing
    long after the fat lady
    got a toe-tag and i took a nap


    lord or no lord i shall be glad
    when anyone comes down
    out of the ice and strangeness
    we call heaven
    i'm all about tough love
    a box a whip
    a mask with a zipper on it
    but pants or no pants
    i'm not wearing their underwear

    Submitted on 2007-05-03 21:38:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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