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Author: MysterydarkPoet ASL Info:    20/f/Aust Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173 Words: 70

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Your words are silent & I can't feel my heart beat I've been frozen cold lying on the floor & I'm a tick of the clock away from death Doesn't anybody care? Won't somebdoy come save me? Or try to stop me? In the end It's all about you But I'd run a mile In hope to find you I'd do anything, anything, anything and you know it's true

Submitted on 2007-05-03 22:33:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Aww an honestly sad poem. Somehow this reminds of Bella and Edward from New Moon (when he said he didn't want her and she shut down..and yeah...I'll stop rambling) ... But really, the poems filled with emotion, which is a really really good thing. It's nice to read a clean poem like this. Now for my advice: Think it through, if he hurt you, then you don't want him! People you love and love you back won't hurt you that bad! Cheers, ~Persephone~

| Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]

Aww, this poem makes me so sad!!! I have been so depressed like that before, and what really helps me is to think of some good memories or whatever. I've actually been through something similar to this. But, that's all I have to say! -AnGeL Fave's addition!

| Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]

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