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    dots Submission Name: The Black Rosedots
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    Author: nephthys
    ASL Info:    17/F/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 10/6/6
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 802
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThe Black Rosedots
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    Dark and mysterious.
    Petals Unfold.
    Speaking of secrets never to be told.
    Dark passions never to see the light of day.
    The sky turning dark and grey.
    The end of it all is coming.
    Rapidly approaching.
    There is no warning, there is but one sign,
    one clue of the darkness to come,
    A deceptively beautiful black rose.




    Submitted on 2007-05-04 14:42:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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