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    dots Submission Name: Show me your paindots
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    Author: TheBlackFairy
    ASL Info:    18/female/Caldwell
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 32/29/15
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 984
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    Description:
       I'm writing once more, just for fun, not sure why i ever stoped


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    dotsShow me your paindots
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    Show me your pain
    And Iíll throw it all
    Right back in your
    Perfect little face of

    Twisted lies and broken
    Alibis that
    Continue todrift down from a mind that only a
    Killer would find.
    So let your lies loose upon the unexpected words to reek

    Havoc on your
    Unexpected victims to stupid to
    Remember there best friends pain and
    Try and get away.




    Submitted on 2007-05-04 15:13:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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