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    dots Submission Name: Cracked Concrete Souldots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsCracked Concrete Souldots
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    Good morning!

    I donít feel so cheerful
    but rather tearful.
    Piece by piece
    the complete life of mine
    has been dismantled
    To the state
    I currently lie in
    As a withered soul.
    A soul floating
    like a leaf
    caught in a spin
    soaring and twirling
    intricately high
    in a dance
    with the wind
    till I can merge
    with a cloud
    and let be dropped
    once more
    to simply endure
    the pain all over
    forever and ever!

    Good night!






    Submitted on 2007-05-05 10:00:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really lke the title. i didnt get too much into the poem but do you mind if i used your title in one of my pieces? it wont be the title it will jsut be a part of the write. just asking to be sure your cool with it. i mean, i'll right it anyways but i wontpost it if you dont want me to.









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    | Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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