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    dots Submission Name: Token Of Appreciationdots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 901
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    dotsToken Of Appreciationdots
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    How truly sane!
    to love someone deeply
    and be violently raped
    as a moving gesture.
    How romantic!!!

    How unbelievably normal!
    to hug someone passionately
    and shatter all 24 ribs
    as a way to show
    tender affection!!!

    How wonderfully unique!
    To enhance the beauty of eyes
    with battering bruises
    leaving colourful imprints
    of yellow, red and blue!!!

    How honestly thoughtful!
    To leave an innocent body
    rot and decompose slowly
    with a stunning view
    of her mourning family!!!









    Submitted on 2007-05-05 22:25:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow. i guess you like to write depressing stuff. you are really good at it. you get the point accross and every one knows exactly what you mean. you are a right to the point kind of guy i guess. good work
    | Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]


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