Token Of Appreciation by caballero7137

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Submission Name: Token Of Appreciation dots

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Author:	caballero7137
ASL Info:	22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:	0.72 - 9/104/123
Words:	90

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	901
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Token Of Appreciation dots

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How truly sane!
to love someone deeply
and be violently raped
as a moving gesture.
How romantic!!!

How unbelievably normal!
to hug someone passionately
and shatter all 24 ribs
as a way to show
tender affection!!!

How wonderfully unique!
To enhance the beauty of eyes
with battering bruises
leaving colourful imprints
of yellow, red and blue!!!

How honestly thoughtful!
To leave an innocent body
rot and decompose slowly
with a stunning view
of her mourning family!!!

Submitted on 2007-05-05 22:25:10 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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wow. i guess you like to write depressing stuff. you are really good at it. you get the point accross and every one knows exactly what you mean. you are a right to the point kind of guy i guess. good work
| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.