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    dots Submission Name: doctor's notationdots
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    Author: poppi
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 72/55/37
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    Description:
       a doctor's opinion, i suppose. pulled from a few sorces of insperation i tried to bring them together into one thing.


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    dotsdoctor's notationdots
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    I'm content to leave
    With no one left to greive
    My fears on the tide
    It's heartache that wont subside
    A nightmare I survived
    Was eraised with the tears I cried
    Suicidal ambition
    Is this hells tuition

    A treaty signed with hate
    So poorly, I tried to escape my fate
    Bounded in chians
    Watching as the moon wains
    Grasped within these evil clutches
    Fever rises in the demon touches
    Blissfull disaster
    Death is my master

    Often be my mistake
    In believing the fake
    I'm contianed without a reason
    Acused of sanity's treason
    The pane of glass through which I look
    Allows me to be read like an open book
    A gasping sigh
    This is my goodbye




    Submitted on 2007-05-05 23:17:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    oh yea your poetry stuffers, you should post more cus i like it ^_^
    g2g l8rz
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Blood†Tears | [ Reply to This ]


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