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    dots Submission Name: walk the line dots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1054
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       for the secong time im putting this up hoping to get some comments.. enjoy


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    dotswalk the line dots
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    Walk the Line
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    Im walking.....
    I'm tired....
    But it makes me stronger,
    For my baby,
    Without him, my life would be no longer.

    Im doing this for him.

    I'm trying so hard,
    That I am in pain,
    But I know with all this,
    I'll have so much to gain.

    I'm in Love.
    What else can I say.
    I'll do anything for him,
    I KNOW im here to stay.

    I know he Loves me,
    And I know I did him wrong,
    But he also knows im sorry,
    And I've even proved it in song.

    Even though everything is better now,
    And I will say this one more time,

    I Love him so much,
    And I will forever WALK THE LINE.




    "Because your mine I'll walk the line "
    *Johnny Cash*










    Submitted on 2007-05-06 09:32:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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