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    dots Submission Name: Waiting to diedots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1015
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    dotsWaiting to diedots
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    Wating to Die
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    I write to feel,
    I feel to write.
    Blade to my wrist,
    With a messed up knife.

    I live to Die,
    I die to Live.
    Just to feel the pain,
    I have everything to give.

    You think im crazy,
    That may be true.
    Theres nothing I haven't tried,
    Or anything I won't do.

    The world is messed up,
    In and out.
    Bush can give that a real
    Big Shout.

    Political Rages,
    Pop star stages.
    Its all the same,
    A crying shame.

    Thats why I hve a blade
    To my wrist,
    With a clinch in my fist.

    Saying Goodbye!
    Never having to hear
    Another lie.

    Alll I want to do
    Is Die.
    So I turn on the news
    To hear one more lie,
    Watching the blood flow,
    WAITNG TO DIE.









    Submitted on 2007-05-06 09:34:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i'll comment all right. i am going through pretty much the same thing. its like...its the only thing you have control over, you know? except i don't think i'm waiting ot die...i prefer to think of it as...waiting to live. because im not living much now...what is living anyway? ooo...im so confused O.o
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]


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