You have a way with words,
they inspire me to the fullest.
Your words calm the seas of my soul,
And give me hope for the future.
You look into my eyes
And give me a soft kiss
The feeling of security in my grasp.
I would wait a life time,
For just one more minute with you.
When you’re by my side
Nothing can go wrong
You actually listen to what I say
And treat me as though I am the only one in the room
My past is what has made me who I am today
And that is what you like about me.
I am who I am
You care for me as I am
Not wanting to change me
| nice. it sounds like who ever this was written for was someone very cool.. someone that loves you very much.. i like this piece its very touching||| Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ] || This was very good but there somthing missing to give it the "WOW" to it...idk what it is but i like this piece showing that somtime the lil things can be the bigger and the more improtant things. I think if you should this him he would really like this and get a feeling of what you really feel.....|
Well i hope to hear form you and keep up the good job
P.S. sorry bout not giving no examples how to give it that wow to or piece...
|| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ] |