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    dots Submission Name: ‘Catastrophe’dots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 365/575/251
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dots‘Catastrophe’dots
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    I purge paint— a brush thrust down my throat
    Searching for my soul. O, a soul—
    There must be me down the depths
    There somewhere— but I find
    Despairingly, not I rest in control.

    As nothing does not sore as a heart can reak
    I have been drowned in agony and ache.
    I survey my realm, for relief, comfort—
    But lay solely drunkened pain and hollow joy;
    Can we commiserate?

    Every time I fall apart, I fail to fall together again—
    I peruse the damned I know so well.
    Nothing but an afterthought,
    Myself I call ‘Catastrophe’—
    For I am ever sinking in my own personal Hell.




    Submitted on 2007-05-06 23:54:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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