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    dots Submission Name: No Matter What...dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       can't sleep, face is irrated from soap i believe its buring and hurts! shrug.. figured I'd write.. good excuse huh :-P


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    dotsNo Matter What...dots
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    No matter...

    No matter the day of the week
    or the hour of each day...

    My past seems to come back!
    As if its a shadow of mine...
    Always following me

    Never getting a chance to get away
    for it follows me as my shadow would.

    No matter how I deal with it
    or how hard I try to accept what has happened

    I am faced with yet something else that reminds me such events
    that pains me, oh so much...

    I try my damest to be able to awake with no tears.
    I try my best to look on the bright side...
    Of this life I am living

    but it seems as if...
    No matter what, my past is meant to stalk me...

    I feel as if it forever will

    So I ask you now Lord,

    Please forgive me for my sins,
    Please accept what I have done wrong,
    Wash away my fears
    And give me a new beginning...

    A beginning that has no limitation...
    A beginning so I can start clean and fresh!

    Please, Lord look down upon me and find me worthy of your acceptance...

    Please, I ask of you this one thing!




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      BEAUTIFUL....that was fantactic, real and so full of energy.. your very brave this is great piece and i can't begin to tell you how much i relate
    peace...
    kristian
    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ]
      Meh, its good but I think your older poems were better. Anyway, I like the idea of how your past seems to reflect on you in your future. And yes I did find this in my private messages as stalks post =p I rock... Like chicken wings!
    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]


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