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    dots Submission Name: For a Friend (can anyone help me with this issue?)dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 885
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    Description:
       My friend has a crush on someone that only displays interest if he thinks he can get you into bed. I try to make her see this But I can't. She thinks that I'm jealous and want him for myself. That's so far from the truth. He acts like he like me but he just thinks that I'm I loose and that makes her even angrier with me. Can anyone help me?


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    dotsFor a Friend (can anyone help me with this issue?)dots
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    He looks at you with open eyes.
    You peer back.

    Is he as close minded as he appears?
    Can you be the one to open his heart?

    To show him what affection is?
    To let him see how it feels?

    Could you be the only one to save him?
    Save him from himself.

    His own stupidity...
    Could it be his downfall?

    Would he try for you?
    Do you think you could get him to?

    Would he be worth the time?
    Could he make up for the heart ache?

    How can you help this boy?
    Not for yourself... But for your friendís sake?

    Would you be willing to deal with that pain?
    Endure it for a friend?

    How could you explain?
    You were doing it in her best interest.

    You didnít want her to be hurt.
    Not because of him.

    What would you do?
    What could you do?

    For a friend.




    Submitted on 2007-05-07 09:16:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah... Yes i know how that is.. from the dude's perspective, though, good right. It's something i can really relate to. "His own stupidity" well, reminds me of mine, not that i ever tried to get in bed with anybody, but you know, i've got my "stupidity", too. Foolishness is tied up in the heart of a boy.It wasn't a very clear piece, if you've never felt it before, but i have, so i know all too well. Very original, very unique. U do good. R u on any other sites?
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      yeh i like this poem. ill help you in a min. ill pm you this does suck ive been there.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow sorry to hear that that is happening all I can really suggest you doing is trying your heart out to convince her of the truth and if that fails just be there as a caring friend afterwards. I just hope you can get through to her before she regrets it.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by ShadowedAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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