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may day

Author: weepingwillow
ASL Info:    23/f/Brighton
Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 38 /75 /35
Words: 86
Class/Type: Story /Nature
Total Views: 1833
Average Vote:    5.0000
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may day

dotted lines between vision and submission
the wavy schism benefitting just one bare-rythm,
your valour bites hard into greywhite flesh
producing mottled,clotted strings that harden lumpy.
all the fun of the fayre encompassed in a single balloon,which takes a flight of fancy, stripping the sky of any hue as it vanishes.
my skeletal fragility is momentarily gnawed upon,by tiny voles who skitter up the tree i thought to be carcass stretched, you beat upon it with tiny fists,pounding the tempo my frayed feet skip.

Submitted on 2007-05-07 13:51:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is quite the nice invention here, I like the imagery created and the tone held throughout the piece, and you can never beat skeletal fragility. Cheerio for this one.
| Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by yonkit | [ Reply to This ]

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