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    dots Submission Name: may daydots
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    Author: weepingwillow
    ASL Info:    23/f/Brighton
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 38/75/35
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Story/Nature
    Total Views: 1759
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsmay daydots
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    dotted lines between vision and submission
    the wavy schism benefitting just one bare-rythm,
    your valour bites hard into greywhite flesh
    producing mottled,clotted strings that harden lumpy.
    all the fun of the fayre encompassed in a single balloon,which takes a flight of fancy, stripping the sky of any hue as it vanishes.
    my skeletal fragility is momentarily gnawed upon,by tiny voles who skitter up the tree i thought to be spiny.my carcass stretched, you beat upon it with tiny fists,pounding the tempo my frayed feet skip.




    Submitted on 2007-05-07 13:51:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is quite the nice invention here, I like the imagery created and the tone held throughout the piece, and you can never beat skeletal fragility. Cheerio for this one.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by yonkit | [ Reply to This ]


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