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    Author: masterzyn
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    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    when you love someone your not with what can you do?You cant leave the one your with for fear of hurting them again.You cant stand to see the other with anyone but you.You think of nothing but them. you do things with them that is wrong.You will hurt one of them sooner or later but why does it have to be so hard?One has choices to make sometimes they are hard sometimes easy.But in the end hope they are right.For if you hurt one they will never let you heal them.They will ignore you,hate you, and shun you.You can only hope what you did was right,even if to one it was wrong.When your in love you do wat it takes even if it means being hated by the ones that care.As long as you make them happy your fine.But beware for love is not fair love is cruel and deceptive and will always hurt someone.




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       I love this! you need to post more of your stuff up here.. I even have some things youve written! So ya.. I miss you and wish you were here! We need to hang out again some time! where we dont have to worry about running into crystal or her friends........
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds familar.it does atune the man/woman thing as this generation would know it.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by to-wit | [ Reply to This ]


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