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    dots Submission Name: i dont know any moredots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    idc about typos eaither...comment plese


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    dotsi dont know any moredots
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    i dont know any more
    i cant take this pain
    it is becoming unbearible
    its strangleing all that i ever knew
    all my hopes
    my heart is numb
    and is rotting away
    from all the scars of the past and present
    and mishapened it into something
    that cannot be chaged
    this life is killing me
    beyond anything i could comprehend
    this life is destroying me
    plese Lord when will it end




    Submitted on 2007-05-07 20:18:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i've got a quote for ya, whether you want it or not.

    'tis better to fight and lose than to not fight at all.

    another tip of the hat and farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]
      PN is right. You sound like you need to talk to a real person... and not some nameless face on the web. Things will get better. Highschool is a tough time in life... I hated highschool. But, with some perseverence and hope, it'll turn out alright.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by DavidHirt | [ Reply to This ]
      pain ends when you refuse to give it power. it ends when you brush it off and get back up, even when you're not ready. Like that Rascal Flat's song "Stand". Great song. if you have the means, i suggest you listen to it. it is so choice. pain only rules you as long as you allow it to. someone or something only torments you as long as you let them. if you're looking for advice, i guess i don't have anything other than "Life sucks, then you die". even though you don't know me, if you want to talk, just PM me or leave a post on my page. and if not to the losers here, talk to SOMEONE, at least...good luck.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


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