Description: been forever since I've posted. I found this. there were only the first eight lines, so I completed it and put it up.
Stardust and Sinner's Ash -------------------------------------------
Smoke rising higher
Choke upon the fumes
A line of sinners
Blackened 'neath the moon
Crowd roaring higher
Above screams of pain
Sneers of agony
A call of disdain
You shall be led to your God
You shall be remembered a saint
Bow, cower before the great
Within the altairs of your flaws
The flames extinguished
Now seared husks remain
Purified once more
This town of sin
Time to test your faith
In dead tradition
Forgive not one thing
Bask in perdition
You shall be led to sainthood
You shall be remembered a God
Bury and guard our great frauds
Give into temptation; the fruit
The stars align tonight
A child is born, five grown men die
An angel falls tonight
Shattered before our very eyes
The stars align tonight
Dawning wrong upon the right.
well I can't say I entirely understood the intent and meaning of this, I was impressed with some of the language, and the twisting as it were of some conventional clichés.
interesting read...
Submission Name: Stardust and Sinner's Ash
