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    dots Submission Name: Giving Universedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 630
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 287



    Description:
       There is so much we can give and giving truly is receiving - love, smiles, joy, beauty......Whole cosmos are created!!!


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    dotsGiving Universedots
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    Open hands
    and out
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    Stars A Giving
    Lights
    A Love

    Gone is not
    when gifted
    shining rays
    of Hope, Heart
    Soul, Body
    Mind




    Submitted on 2007-05-08 11:47:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love those positive assertions of yours!
    | Posted on 2011-06-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      t
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    inspired of E.E. Cummings it seems.

    Stars a giving lights, a love?

    Love therefore is light - hate therefore is darkness

    You would become darkness if you refuse to come to know love and only think of hate, but
    Tiff, you are the light, the love, the nature that walks among us.
    | Posted on 2007-05-29 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      you know i love it. its awesome. wow. i like the

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    its creative. i dont know if i have anything like that. good job


    tina
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      You certainly have a fan above, and I concur.

    HH.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      No matter how crappy life can be it's always better when you have a great state of mind or a beautiful tiff that reminds you that things aren't that bad. You have the best attitude towards life and people I have ever seen and it's the giving people like you that makes this world a better place to live in. Everyone should take a page from you amazing book and lend a good word, thought, vibe or hand to everyone that needs one. This is not only inspirational, but also a powerful message. Thank you tiff for being the great person you are and sharing yourself with the world (especially elite)
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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