Description: I wrote this song immediately after my breakup with my [now ex] boyfriend of ten months &a huge fight with my best friend of four years. Fortunately, things have cleared up since then but I still love this because it's one of my better works lyric-wise.
A Wish... -------------------------------------------
started a fight with the world today
and I can't say
that I'm winning
Lost more than a few good friends
when will this all just end?
I guess im sinning
for wishing that I
wasn't still alive...
I wish that I
were still a child
so I could believe that there was something
coming my way
I wish that I
had never cried
Over you..
I feel that there is nothing left
I'm all out of breath
The air's escaped me
I'm done with hurting the ones i love
I need to escape from
what they think i'll be
So leave me to lie
and lose my life
I wish that I
were still a child
so I could believe that there was something
coming my way
I wish that I
had never cried
Over you..
I'm done
I'm through
with this
with you
You left me to myself
The one more dangerous to me
than anyone else...
I wish that I
had never cried
over you
I wish that they
had let me die
when the storm came through
got in a fight with the world today
I can surely say
That I have lost...
Very Rhythmic. I like the way it 'flows'(for lack of a better term). The most intriguing part, however, wasn't the rhythm and meter. I was moved by the emotion that I felt behind the words. It reminds me of how I feel alot of the time. I would write more, but I'm at work and just got very busy.
I think I understand this. There's one part that caught my eye, though. ---
"I'm done with hurting the ones i love
I need to escape from
what they think i'll be"
It's strange. I can relate to this so much in a way. Seems I too have been hurting everyone, one person really in particular, I think you can guess who...& that person has been thinking less of me...& it's horrible...to be caught in a mess like that.
sooo, we definitely have to talk morrreee. soon i hopes? : )
Submission Name: A Wish...
