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    dots Submission Name: The complainer and the Con Artistdots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 620
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe complainer and the Con Artistdots
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    Harsh wind blows a face and chills the nose
    Cold hearts remain hard and dark thoughts shed no light
    Eyes scan over the horizon but nothing grows
    Only the harsh ravens take flight

    A man stands still in the bitter frost
    Waiting, wait, for fresh new meat
    The cruel environment continues on, leaving the mind lost
    The man just stands there; waiting for the one he will greet

    Time passes
    Carrying on that which could drive a man mad
    Finally a young woman crosses were there would be grasses
    The manís face soon fills with glad

    She is dainty and cheerful
    Not having a clue for what awaits her
    Not knowing those green eyes will soon be tearful
    Or everything she knows and loves will soon be a blur

    He grabs her attention with his mysterious ways and devilish appearance
    Asking her the business of her being and existence
    Saying there should be no interference
    She begins to put between them, distance

    The woman fed him her fear
    Starting to be cleanse of all good
    Just being in the presence of this man causes her body to want to tear
    Perhaps he is just misunderstood?

    Have you a purpose? If not anything to trade? Says he
    She is silent
    The words sting like that of a bee
    She wonders soon things will turn violent

    He talks of life and his miserable existence
    How he wishes it could all change
    The woman asks if his words were so would he have any resistance
    To things that involves pain and that that is strange

    He asks her the same
    Again she says nothing
    So quiet so tame
    Not even the icy snow will cling


    They continue to talk
    Of pain and suffering
    But watching each other more that a hawk
    Neither move nor cringe

    The man learns much
    Turing away
    For his life he still wishes clutch
    The sky turns gray

    The woman spoke in a hushed tone
    I know what you are
    Where you came from and of your heart of stone
    Those you think of scars

    You believe your life is worthless
    How you want to die and quit
    Yet with comes to giving it up you second-guess
    Why do you not admit?

    You do not deserve to belong
    On this planet
    Of the strong
    Dripping on your neck beads of sweat

    Nerves and worry fled the man
    Thinking fast he ran
    Now knowing his life was a scam
    His friends, partners, and clan

    Darkness draped over the sky
    A cry
    Then nothing to defy
    Not even an ally

    Then a
    Drip drop
    Drip drop
    The blood falls in the new born puddle

    There he lies
    No soul
    No love
    No life

    He constantly complained of life
    To he bossy his kids
    And his wife

    A new woman came along
    He complained to her as well
    But to bad his whining was soon to all gone
    For this woman originated from the depths of hell

    He spoke of hating his existence
    Wanting everything to end
    With out any assistance
    He did not intend

    For the woman
    To steal his soul
    And cut short his life span
    Now he rots in a firry hole

    And the woman so fair
    Walks on
    With no one to spare
    For her sympathy, her innocence, her kindly, all a con

    End













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