this reminded me of this video we have of our band, and as you watch it you realize that the sky behind us is changing constantly, the clouds morphing and moving. it's a trip to watch! it is like abstract art. this poem made me want to just lay down in the grass and watch the sky! i think i'll go home and do just that! thanks!
Oh wow, OH WOW! For me this is a shiver-down-my-spine poem because this combines two of my favourite subjects - colour and watching the sky. This is just awesome cuddle! I loved the use of your word kinetic. I knew it only with relation to Physics (Kinetic Energy) but suddenly I see the word very differently
OK, you're gonna blow this off, but I would get rid of "so" and "that it was". Those words add nothing, and that means they detract from the ones that do. Beyond that, this reminds me of my teenage days, getting high and watching the clouds morph into dragons or dogs or whatever. Nice poem if you take out those words. Or at least thats what I think.
the poem which you wrote is true to me, as I usually watch the skies in a drunken stupor. I feel somewhat glad that someone out there is just like me, for this I honor your greatly. Wo zhen Xihuan Ni Shi. I like your poem my friend.