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    dots Submission Name: i seen a ghostdots
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    Author: to-wit
    Elite Ratio:    0.59 - 27/148/488
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsi seen a ghostdots
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    frozen in time,the sight,the angle,the killgraph shine.the whine of voice,the course,the pity,the seen a city and give me death look and routine.string man and devilly good,knew he would.knew he would.appear.




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 04:48:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Maybe it is my limited mind, but I do not have a clue to the meaning of your poem.
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by itinnmannn | [ Reply to This ]


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