It's simple and to the point. It's nice. But it struck me as ... cliché. It seems like every poem out there is about love, suicide, depression and cutting. I like how you put it though. I like it. Keep writing.
I did like this poem allot. It is very simple, and packs a hell of a punch. Very, Very Very creative. I never thought of this topic from the point of view you express. I would like to add this to my favorite list, but I am new here, and do not know how to do it.
What I like about your masterpiece is that you show this duality in the love that you have with this person. You acknowledge the bad, but you embrace the good.
I guess you have that special personality that always see the good in people. For you the glass must be half full.
I can understand that... My friends always thought I was upset over something bad that my ex did... But it wasn't it was the good he did and why it made me feel the way it did... Anyway I liked.. Keep wrighting