Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Meanderingdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 638
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 455



    Description:
       Love,Peace,Joy & Smiles to share

    tif


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMeanderingdots
    -------------------------------------------


    A lazy stroll
    down the Main Street
    A smile and a hello
    to all I see and meet

    Oh, the colors!
    Floating into view
    Spring in bloom
    And, ALL is New

    Birds and bees
    go buzzing by
    How I dream, too,
    I can fly!

    And, as the sun sinks
    down below the hills

    I AM "IT's" Love
    and oh, how "IT" feels!




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 12:37:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Hi Tiff,

    It's never too late or too many times to be reminded that the essence we are is love. I have been practicing "being" rather than
    thinking and it's amazing how many gifts and miracles are planned for us, if we just get our minds and egos out of the way

    Love and blessings for your sweet opening eyes of Spring.

    Nan
    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi thanx for the comments of late yor posts are alwaz so colourful and uplifting
    i am not sure what you meant on yor last comment on souls light
    that piece is the introduction of a novel i wrote in the past year i have a publisher already i just havent had the time to put it on the computer and send it off i will send you a copy its about 600 pages of all new poetry and stories all combined
    i have alot going on in life in the past year i am moving and trying to get reestablished

    anywaz keep writing and i will read
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Meandering sure is a great way to wile away the hours. Very descriptive, and up to your usual high standard.

    CK.
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your bit of meandering through life and nature on a beautiful Spring day...
    and yeah,
    I too, wonder how it would feel to fly like a bird, or in this case, a bee.

    -enjoyable read!
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by Wild Flower | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this
    This is a great write welcoming in the beautiful season of Spring
    Spring is my favorite season as it really shows all the beauty of nature in full bloom
    Great Job!!!
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please keep in touch
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      What is IT?

    It's such a simple spring-is-here poem.

    And the ending comes and I'm thrown.

    Yay.

    -Kelsea
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    142307

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Every..... written by jackz
    prison written by ShyOne
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    You read free written by poetotoe
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow
    a mood to be free written by Daniel Barlow
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry