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    dots Submission Name: Meanderingdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    A lazy stroll
    down the Main Street
    A smile and a hello
    to all I see and meet

    Oh, the colors!
    Floating into view
    Spring in bloom
    And, ALL is New

    Birds and bees
    go buzzing by
    How I dream, too,
    I can fly!

    And, as the sun sinks
    down below the hills

    I AM "IT's" Love
    and oh, how "IT" feels!

    Submitted on 2007-05-10 12:37:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi Tiff,

    It's never too late or too many times to be reminded that the essence we are is love. I have been practicing "being" rather than
    thinking and it's amazing how many gifts and miracles are planned for us, if we just get our minds and egos out of the way

    Love and blessings for your sweet opening eyes of Spring.

    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi thanx for the comments of late yor posts are alwaz so colourful and uplifting
    i am not sure what you meant on yor last comment on souls light
    that piece is the introduction of a novel i wrote in the past year i have a publisher already i just havent had the time to put it on the computer and send it off i will send you a copy its about 600 pages of all new poetry and stories all combined
    i have alot going on in life in the past year i am moving and trying to get reestablished

    anywaz keep writing and i will read
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Meandering sure is a great way to wile away the hours. Very descriptive, and up to your usual high standard.

    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your bit of meandering through life and nature on a beautiful Spring day...
    and yeah,
    I too, wonder how it would feel to fly like a bird, or in this case, a bee.

    -enjoyable read!
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by Wild Flower | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this
    This is a great write welcoming in the beautiful season of Spring
    Spring is my favorite season as it really shows all the beauty of nature in full bloom
    Great Job!!!
    God Bless

    Please keep in touch
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      What is IT?

    It's such a simple spring-is-here poem.

    And the ending comes and I'm thrown.


    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]

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