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Another Day...

Author: Ben Gunn
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Live and let live
but who said
love and let love?
No-one, in my experience...

Another Day...

Awakens Man's heart - wherein lies,
The innate ability
His fellow Man - until another day dies.

The continuous loop,

Ben Gunn Early 1990's

Submitted on 2007-05-10 15:05:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Amazing, my thoughts the past few days have been on the same subject. I love it, it's short, to the point and 100% true.
| Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by DeeBaby6389 | [ Reply to This ]

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