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    dots Submission Name: poem of lyrics 1dots
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    Author: Ignis Fatuus
    ASL Info:    18/m/earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 19/29/20
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 968
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1083



    Description:
       borrowed work, a dada influenced work made up of lyrics. Since I use less than 10% of any given artists work it's legal.


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    dotspoem of lyrics 1dots
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    I don't know why I'm still waiting

    I can't make you mine

    and when I wake you're, never there

    we were meant to be, but we lost it

    You may be right, I may be crazy,

    but I just may be the lunatic you're lookin for

    I guess it wasn't really right, I guess it wasn't

    meant to be, it didn't matter what they said

    If that movin' up then I'm movin' out

    You promise heaven then put me through hell

    Doesn't make a difference if we make it or not.

    It's now or never, I ain't gonna live forever

    You're getting worse, I swear it.

    It seems like every day, I make mistakes,

    I just can't get it right

    She's to much for me, but I keep coming back
    for more

    Rendezvous, then I'm through with you

    Do you know what it feels like, being alone?




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 19:37:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      my new fav!
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 00:00:00 | by Xena | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey that's a pretty novel idea, I've never seen it done before and I must say that I really quite like it. 100% for originality, where on earth did you get the idea from?? I'd like to see another one of these so please give it another shot. xx
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, I think it's interesting. I can honestly say that you are the first person I've ever seen do this. I notice how the lines don't necessarily fit perfectly together. To make this easier to read I suggest that you take off the double spacing between the different lines. Live, Love, Write.
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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