Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: poem of lyrics 1dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Ignis Fatuus
    ASL Info:    18/m/earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 19/29/20
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 1022
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1083



    Description:
       borrowed work, a dada influenced work made up of lyrics. Since I use less than 10% of any given artists work it's legal.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotspoem of lyrics 1dots
    -------------------------------------------


    I don't know why I'm still waiting

    I can't make you mine

    and when I wake you're, never there

    we were meant to be, but we lost it

    You may be right, I may be crazy,

    but I just may be the lunatic you're lookin for

    I guess it wasn't really right, I guess it wasn't

    meant to be, it didn't matter what they said

    If that movin' up then I'm movin' out

    You promise heaven then put me through hell

    Doesn't make a difference if we make it or not.

    It's now or never, I ain't gonna live forever

    You're getting worse, I swear it.

    It seems like every day, I make mistakes,

    I just can't get it right

    She's to much for me, but I keep coming back
    for more

    Rendezvous, then I'm through with you

    Do you know what it feels like, being alone?




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 19:37:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      my new fav!
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 00:00:00 | by Xena | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey that's a pretty novel idea, I've never seen it done before and I must say that I really quite like it. 100% for originality, where on earth did you get the idea from?? I'd like to see another one of these so please give it another shot. xx
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, I think it's interesting. I can honestly say that you are the first person I've ever seen do this. I notice how the lines don't necessarily fit perfectly together. To make this easier to read I suggest that you take off the double spacing between the different lines. Live, Love, Write.
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    142332

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    To written by SavedDragon
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Linger written by saartha
    The Promise written by annie0888
    This written by Chelebel
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Bond written by saartha
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Giving written by jjd
    Break Up written by WriteSomething

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry