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Getting caught between emotions; I didn't think it would go this far. It was looking like a momentary promise. Fate refused farewells. Inspired by something beautiful. He captivated me from the subtle start. It might have been a dream. Everyday seems a little clearer. I was swept off my feet, the night I met him I don't question it. Complex affections made me believe. I gave him my heart, for what its worth. An unstoppable momentum. We became notably intertwined, yet I tried not to notice. It became inevitable, but I was the last one to know. They were words that I could never say. |
Hey hey, you've got some really good stuff in here ... "I was swept off my feet, the night I met him" seems to be lacking something though. Shalom oxo | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by flyfire | [ Reply to This ] | oh yeah... and she's gotta point there too... that WAS a nice touch... | | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ] | I liked this. It has a good display of emotion in a clear way. I liked how you did the 3 line then 1 line stanzas. That definatly set things apart and made it easy to read. | Love Always, Delta Leah | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by maybe_tommorow | [ Reply to This ] | you listen to a lot of emo [censored] huh? | this isn't something to be proud of, I will say that,,, In fact... that's all I can say | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ] | |