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    Author: jamm
    ASL Info:    14/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.51 - 21/12/27
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 874
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    Bytes: 595



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       ha i like this one cause it makes no sense


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    dotsno purposedots
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    life has no purpose
    why do i stay
    when i have a one way ticket
    my very own razor blade
    every little cut lets out the stress
    every little cut eases my pain

    i do fear death i don't wanna die
    i love all the smells and of the views
    but the pain and sorrow is so very strong
    my friends and family make me feel wrong

    i have no other way this time I'm not going to stay
    ill cut one last time with no good bye
    and i don't want no one to cry
    this time it cut i am gonna die




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 20:01:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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