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    Author: psyko
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 376/168/66
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 831
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       to all those who are unsure of whether or not I'm fake...


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    dotsI'll tell you what...dots
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    EVERY fucking post that I comment on is one that I read... and when I say something about flow, rhyme, art, command of language or use of words... THAT IS MY FUCKING REAL FUCKING OPINION... so be the fuck ware of my comments cause if you write SHIT, then I'll fucking let you know, but if you write something that really touches me (the untouchable mostly) then I will let you know that too... I'm sorry I aint a fake ass politically correct BITCH of society here. but when you get words from me on your page... pucker the fuck up cause it's real motherfucker... I give 2 comments to every person who gives me 1 on average, and i read at least 3 posts from everyone who gives me comments... so go read my shit and return the fucking favor.

    that's all.

    Psyko




    Submitted on 2007-05-10 22:12:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      someone i deeply respect once told me that a politically correct people are a weak people. i agree. i mean i think we should do what we can to not intentionally hurt others...
    anyway i'm off point.
    i guess what i see is a lot of people using this site as a storage locker for their words. posting a ton of stuff and expecting a million replies just coz its there.
    if you dont pull somethin down once in awhile and actually work on it,try and make it better,revise, then whats the point of a "writing workshop".
    whatever i hear ya.
    good then.
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    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm...ranty rant rant...sometimes i think its a shame to rant when you could be doing something so much more worthy..i mean hell everyone needs a good rant..but this one is useless. anyone who needs to read it wont like it and everyone who agrees will be people who arent the problem...
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      oooooooh is someone feelling testy today... but seriously you've got a point. and i should know i've been on the recieving end of you're brutally honest opinion more than once. but really how do people expect to improve if no one has the balls to tell them that they suck...

    shadow
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Fair enough? If people cannot deal with your honesty that is their own problem. Dont let them get to you.

    Enjoy.
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by flyfire | [ Reply to This ]


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