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    dots Submission Name: 1.99 $ dolldots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 778
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 688



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    Iíll be your next victim,
    Oh 1.99 $ doll!
    Undress my skin of Life
    till my anatomy
    and my traumatize soul
    can be sold separately
    with proof of purchase.

    I donít care much
    if I finish in a casket
    or in a dusty shoebox.
    Simply drain my flow
    and let the ravens
    nestle into my soul
    as they plant seeds
    that sprouts vast field
    of mournerís roses.

    Oh 1.99 $ doll
    set me free
    and force me
    to endure,
    to suffer,
    the pain
    of a million lives
    so I can finally know
    what it means to live.






    Submitted on 2007-05-10 22:20:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      is that your voodoo doll or blow up doll your talking about? hahaha

    just [censored] with you... this was really good, and damn well written.

    I really don't know what to say about it... beautiful control of your wording, and very nice flow.

    Psyko
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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