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    dots Submission Name: the blink of an i; transformsdots
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    Author: flyfire
    ASL Info:    17, Female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 33/19/14
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe blink of an i; transformsdots
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    i
    am no more
    than an idea
    hidden
    in the folds
    of evolving thought;

    unfolded
    from the petals
    of the mind
    i

    become.




    Submitted on 2007-05-11 01:27:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is only good because it's thought provoking, slightly discriptive but pretty vague as well... you gotta think it before you do it.

    Psyko
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not so sure i get this. But from what i take out of it, it seems you are lost and waiting for the future to behold what your going to be as a person or something.interesting write. Wish there was alittle more to clairfy what your going through or what the poems more so about but sometimes alittle mystery aint so bad after all,
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]


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