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    dots Submission Name: What wasdots
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    Author: flyfire
    ASL Info:    17, Female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 33/19/14
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhat wasdots
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    Light through curtains and

    a murmured goodbye,


    the last she saw of him

    with fond memories.




    Submitted on 2007-05-11 01:49:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This would be perfect paired with a right photograph or drawing! I'm not good at short writes and always appreciate when someone does well at them. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      somethin tells me you read something SOMEONE ELSE wrote, and starting thinking hard about someone important to you... how close am i?
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, For Four Lines. They completely hit home for me.Im going throw losing a boyfriend and a bestfriend. So To me this totally makes sense. I wish i could say something more on this but you know its only four lines but there a good four lines.
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]


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