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    dots Submission Name: The Pricedots
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    Author: sum12luv
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 55/76/33
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       I can't spell


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    dotsThe Pricedots
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    Smiling through tears,
    masking the pain.

    vulnerable once more,
    and shattered just the same.

    Innocence was lost
    for a price she had to pay.

    Where he picked her up,
    he later left her to decay.

    He's in her every dream-
    around every corner.

    No escape.

    Hiding her face,
    she's faking a smile.

    Running from it all.
    Falling, fading.

    She hears the song.
    Sees the place.
    Remembers the time.

    Consumed by him.
    Crushed by him.

    Her innocence was lost
    for a price she had to pay.











    Submitted on 2007-05-11 13:04:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Help with the spelling; *vulnerable and *innocence.
    This spoke to me. I guess it's because i relate to it. Loveses the lines 'Where he picked her up,
    he later left her to decay.'
    flyfire.
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by flyfire | [ Reply to This ]


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