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    dots Submission Name: Untitled Sestina by Azuiredots
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    Author: crimson echo
    ASL Info:    19 M U.S. of A
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 412/149/55
    Words: 266
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 207
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       A birthday gift from Azuire. Enjoy; I certainly did.


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    dotsUntitled Sestina by Azuiredots
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    Obliquity, a vessel found in ocean's depth
    Framed with balloons and an antique mask
    Granted wings and soared to such a height
    Without the grip of frost or cold
    And the wholesome glare of deadly flare
    That rippèd through the ink black night.

    So bleak, voyage one through night
    Obverse to blue of endless depth
    Rippled, lost above the blighted flare
    Entwined the most red of mask
    That embraced the warm and coming cold
    Inevitable on the autumn height

    Still fly! Rise to another height
    So spoke the shadowed soul in night
    Venture beyond the freeform cold
    One with sleep and mindless depth
    Engaged the rods behind the mask
    And forbade the light to free the flare.

    Beleaguer not, those fireworks will flare
    Reaching the stars, that other height
    Vermin left to dance with a mask
    Cloud capped gold in wallowing night
    And sunk beneath the ocean’s depth.
    Obliquity, left to die with cold.

    Though sight itself not formed in cold
    Gloves of wind blowing the flare
    Lay it down to rest in dreamless depth
    That awake, molten poured from a height
    Misunderstood by mountainous night
    Emulating the disappearing mask.

    Yet cast off the wicked parade of masks
    Solely seeking to envelop one with cold
    Isolated upon a cave within the night
    So wreathed in whiteness of the flare
    Still fly! Did you not see the fearful height
    That swept the land below its depth

    Obliquity, entrenched in mask and wrapped in flare
    Battling vociferous cold and fleeting height
    Passing swiftly through night and sunk in eternal depth.





    Submitted on 2007-05-11 13:41:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ~*~

    Good job posting this. It would be a shame if someone didn't, Zurie is a quite talented poet and I think it's only right this gets a chance to be commented on. As always, the surrealism, the glow of incantation and a quit tune of a fantasy is present in most of her poems. This one is none the weaker. I admit I got lost in the images and the beautiful word combining but I can't say I'm sorry for it.

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    | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL you really posted it :)

    I have to stop myself from critiquing...I momentarily forgot I wrote it.

    Well, here's to your good health and now I'm off to study.

    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry I took so long to post it...

    --crimson
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]



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